From 83b0bb7d723c37a768fd702375c627b48f91122c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Matt Baer <matt@baer.works>
Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2016 08:37:24 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Tweak introduction copy

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 index.html | 5 ++---
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index fea95aa..55a517b 100644
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 	<div style="max-width: 700px; margin: 0 auto; padding: 0 2em 2em 2em;">
 		<h1>write freely</h1>
-		<p class="intro">
-			Anonymity keeps you safe from nosy neighbors and prying eyes. It allows you to be different parts of yourself while interacting with different people online, just like you do offline. Use these apps to do that.
-		</p>
+		<p class="intro">It's easier now more than ever to write and share your words on the web. New lightweight, anonymous writing tools help you write freely and focus on your words.</p>
+		<p class="intro">Each tool below is free and quick to use, no sign up required. Compare and try them out &mdash; maybe publish a long-form tweet, or create a blog post without the blog. Once you've published, simply share the link.</p>
 
 			<h2>Anonymous Writing Platform Comparison</h2>