From 17a14ea6295df8fad5eef1b3427bfc5b820a9b09 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Matt Baer <matt@baer.works>
Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2016 09:05:09 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Tweak intro copy again for clarity and conciseness

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 index.html | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 370f68a..99511dd 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -133,8 +133,8 @@
 
 	<div style="max-width: 700px; margin: 0 auto; padding: 0 2em 2em 2em;">
 		<h1>write freely</h1>
-		<p class="intro">It's easier now more than ever to write and share your words on the web. New lightweight, anonymous writing tools help you write freely and focus on your words.</p>
-		<p class="intro">Each tool below is free and quick to use, no sign up required. Compare and try them out &mdash; maybe publish a long-form tweet, or create a blog post without the blog. Once you've published, simply share the link.</p>
+		<p class="intro">It's now easier than ever to write and publish your words to the web. New lightweight, anonymous writing tools help you write freely and focus only on your words.</p>
+		<p class="intro">Each tool below is free and quick to use, no sign up required. Compare and try them out &mdash; maybe publish a long-form tweet, or a blog post without the blog. Once you've published simply share the link.</p>
 
 		<h2>Anonymous Writing Platform Comparison</h2>